Of course, fiction writing is a pretty solitary profession, most writers are largely self-taught, and good advice is rare.  What I offer here are answers to your questions on writing.  Email me, I'll email you back, and some questions will be posted here with my comments.
Alas, time doesn't permit me to read or critique manuscripts.

Our  current question:
Well, actually, no one has sent any questions in yet.  So in lieu of an answer, I'm going to reprint here Robert A. Heinlein's Rules of Writing, which most people acknowledge as a great place to start.